Question

【题目】 根据所给情景，参考所给的提示词语，写一篇80词左右的短文。要求文句通顺，语法正确，意思完整。假如你是某地区的留守儿童，名叫王小华。很幸运得到重庆市王先生的资助，才得以继续求学。于是在今年5月10日你给王先生发了一封e-mail，表示感谢。

内容是：1. 收到了书和钱，在教师和同学们的帮助下学习成绩提高很快；

2. 校长和老师都都很高兴，父母对你满意；

3. 下决心今后更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；

4. 希望长大后像王先生一样能帮助别人，做一个对社会有用的人。

提示词：pleased, money and book, return to school, , make much progress, encourage, make up my mind,

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Mr.Wang,

I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help．Thank you so much.

I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. The headmaster and teachers are very happy. My parents are very satisfied with you. They often praise me and encourage me．But for your help, I might have left school and couldn't have got such a good education.

I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress．I hope I can be a useful person to the society when I grow up.And like Mr. Wang, he can help others.

Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Xiaohua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是王小华，是某地区的留守儿童，很幸运得到重庆市王先生的资助，才得以继续求学。要求根据提示内容，给王先生发了一封e-mail，表示感谢。首先要注意e-mail的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。