Question

【题目】请根据所给提示，写一篇文章介绍你的朋友Lily .（ 本题共10分）

要求：

1. 内容要包含以下所给提示，适当发挥。

（1）年龄：12 国籍 ：美国 居住地：东台

（2）班级：七年级一班

（3）外貌：长头发,个头高而苗条; 戴眼镜。

（4）爱好：喜欢阅读、听音乐

（5）学校生活：每天步行上学；最喜欢英语；老师们和同学都很好；每天很开心。

2. 字数：60词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

This is my friend, Lily .

She is twelve years old. She is from America . She lives in Dongtai now . She is in Class One, Grade Seven. She is tall and slim and has long hair. She often wears a pair of glasses. She loves reading and listening to music.

She goes to school on foot every day. She likes English best. Her teachers and classmates are all nice to me. She has a good time at school every day . She is happy every day .

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友Lily。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is ...，She lives...，She loves ...，She likes ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整的表达出提纲中所列内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友是Lily，接下来介绍她的国籍，长相、爱好，最后介绍她在学校过得开心。此处be from, live in, love doing sth, go to school, on foot, be nice to, have a good time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。