Question

【题目】文段表达（15分）

根据中文和英文提示．用英文写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

重阳节（Double Ninth Festival）又称老人节，是我国一个传统节日。在那天人们会出游、登高。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“重阳敬老”为主题为学校英语报投稿，介绍人们怎样庆祝这个节日，你通常做些什么来敬老助老，以及你的想法。

提示词语：go outing，climb，help，look after

1. How do Chinese people celebrate Double Ninth Festival?

2. What do you usually do to show respect to the old?

3. Do you think it is important to respect the old? Why?

Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival

Answer 1

【答案】

Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival. On that day, people usually climb mountains and go outing with their family. It’s also a day to show respect to the old.

As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old. I often visit my grandparents on weekends and talk to them and cheer them up. I also help them with the housework. Meanwhile, I am polite to the old. When I see them on the bus, I always offer them my seat. Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood. I help them carry heavy things when they need help.

I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot to their family and to the country. One day, we will all be old.

【解析】

试题分析：本话题作文要求以“重阳敬老”为主题，介绍重阳节。根据要求，短文要从“人们怎样庆祝这个节日”、“通常做些什么来敬老助老”、“自己的想法”三个方面展开写作。学生需要在三个要点的内容展开上，分配得当，即第二点要详写（给出的提示词可以帮助学生第二点内容的展开），其余两点相对略写。另外，要注意段落间的有效衔接、文章主题时态的正确使用（一般现在时）及词汇句式的丰富多样。

写作亮点：短文层次清楚，详略得当。第一段简介重阳节；第二段详细介绍自己怎样敬老助老，具体生动，中心突出；第三段阐述了敬老的意义，主旨鲜明。第一段中不定式作定语，第二段里的try one's best to do、volunteer to do等结构及时间状语从句，第三段里的不定式作主语，原因状语从句等等语法结构，都为本文增色不少。