Question

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请以How should we keep healthy?为题写一篇60-70词的短文。

要求：1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。

2.字迹工整。

How should we keep healthy?

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Answer 1

One possible version：

How should we keep healthy?

As we know, it is important for us to keep healthy. But how should we keep healthy? I think there are some ways to keep healthy. First, we should have food eating habits, and we should eat more vegetables and fruit. Because it is good for our health. Second, we should do exercise, such as running, walking, swimming and so on. And we must keep sleep eight or nine hours every day. Third, we had better eat less junk food. If we have a good lifestyle, we can keep healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何保持健康。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……; We should…….; We must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了保持健康的重要性，接下来介绍保持健康的方法，最后指出如果有好的生活习惯，就会保持健康。此处用了句型It is important for us to do sth，短语keep healthy, be good for, do exercise等也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。