Question

假设你是名初三毕业生，考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天，请你根据下表所列的 内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，写下这一天的感受。.

去校前	兴奋(原因自拟） 担忧(原因自拟）
到校后	发现老师、同学友好 忘了紧张、感觉自在
离校时	不会再担心 相信会快乐

注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 日记的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；
3. 日记须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
4. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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Answer 1

One possible version ：
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.

这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较简单，需要自己围绕材料适当发挥。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，人称问题比较复杂，注意主谓一致问题。结合材料内容可知本文主要按照时间顺序进行叙述，注意时间状语与时态的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。