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3．在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论．请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法．

团队旅游	◆有导游，不会迷路； ◆不必自己找宾馆； ◆结识朋友，相互帮助．
个人旅游	◆自由安排时间； ◆选择自己喜欢的旅游景点； ◆学会照顾自己，
你的想法	…

注意：1．文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；
2．想法至少在两句以上；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；
4．词数：80一100．
参考词汇：团队旅游travel with a group；个人旅游travel alone安排arrange
Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．
However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me，I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是针对自己喜欢的旅游方式的讨论结果汇报结果且谈谈自己的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称和第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1团队旅游：有导游，不会迷路；不必自己找宾馆；结识朋友，相互帮助．
2个人旅游：自由安排时间；选择自己喜欢的旅游景点；学会照顾自己
3自己的看法．

常用到的重点短语：
with one's help在某人的帮助下
look for寻找
besides另外
make friends 交朋友
what's more再者
learn to do sth学习做某事
look after照顾
would like to do sth想要去做某事

高分句型：
1．①Besides，they can make friends and help each other②while traveling．
①besides另外，阐述下一个观点．
②whil traveling是一个省略句，完整表达是while they are traveling，是一个时间状语从句，主语和主句主语一致，故省略．
2．I want to ②spend enough time visiting the places②I like．
①spend 时间+doing sth花时间做某事
②I like是定语从句，修饰先行词places，关系词which或者that作为定语从句的宾语，故省略．

解答 Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．（高分句型）（团队旅游）
     However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．（个人旅游）
     For me，I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．（高分句型）In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．（自己的看法）

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内．在自己的观点部分，考生需要自己适当的发挥，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．