Question

书面表达（本题共15分）

有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物。拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以No Wasting On Food为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动。

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2. 短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 词数：90左右。

Reasons	a waste of food, money,
pollute the environment
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Suggestions	eat up all your food / clear your plate;
leftovers（剩饭菜）…
order less or smaller dishes
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No Wasting On Food

Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.                                                

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it’s not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China, they don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.

What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇关于节约粮食的短文。本文所给材料比较详细。写作中注意将这次活动的原因介绍清楚，并提出自己希望。结合材料可知本文时态人称问题比较复杂，涉及过去，现在和将来三种时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题及主谓一致问题。写作中注意使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。