Question

【题目】情景作文（1个大题，满分15分）根据提示和要求，写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡情景作文空白处。

某中学网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约80-100词的英语短文。

内容提示：

1. 走路有利于健康安全；

2. 和同学结伴可以互相了解，相互帮助；

3. 不需要父母接送，学会自理；

4. 道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；

5. 有利于保护环境；

要求：

1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。

3. 开头已给出，不计入总次数，可适当发挥。

参考词汇：

be good for 有利于， each other 互相， no longer不再， crowded 拥堵

Walking to school

I think walking to school is good for us.

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Answer 1

【答案】 Walking to school

I think walking to school is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health. Next, it's fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What's more, if we walk, our parents won't have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won't be as crowded as they are now. Walking to school helps us protect the environment as well. I hope more and more students will walk to school.

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇提纲作文。题中给出了写作的要点，写作时一定要注意要点的齐全，并可适当展开扩充；句子之间可加入一些承接性的句子来加强文章的连贯性和逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇文章要点齐全，表达准确流畅。文中用了一些常用的表达方式，如：walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health. 步行到学校是一种锻炼的好方法，它对健康有好处。walking to school为动名词短语作主语。另外，文中用来一些承接性的词语，如First of all 首先；Next 接下来；What's more另外。