Question

【题目】书面表达（共10分）

你的朋友经常和父母吵架，请你写一封信给他建议：1. 如果是他遇到问题，应该和父母谈谈，父母会乐意帮助他 2. 在家经常帮忙做做家务 3. 告诉父母自己的喜好 4. 少玩电脑游戏

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some advice.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some advice.

First，if you have some difficulties in doing sth, you should talk to your parents, your parents will be happy to help you .Second, you should often help your parents with housework at home. Third, you should tell your parents your own preferences .Fourth , you should play less computer games .You should pay attention to your study. I think you can get on well with your parents.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求你写一封信给你的朋友，给他一些建议。首先，审题时，应是当具体地进行谋篇布局。然后，应利用规范的语言，流畅的语句，适当增加细节，对存在问题及采用办法进行详细描述。最后简单总结。另外，还应尽可能地使用一些固定句型及短语，以提高文章的得分等级。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。还使用了一些固定句型及短语，为文章增色不少。如have some difficulties in doing sth等等。