Question

假如你是爱华，请你依据下表，描述一下你的爸爸。

过去	现在
抽烟 很重 呆在家，上网 不干家务	戒烟 通过锻炼等方式减肥 经常旅游，听音乐 帮妈妈干家务，辅导我功课
猜想一下爸爸和我们家庭未来的生活。

要求：字数80—100，可以适当发挥。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A sample：

Hello. I’m Ai Hua. You know that it seems that my father has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me tell you about it.

Firstly, he used to like smoking. But now he gives it up. Besides he used to be fat, but he is losing his weight by exercising himself such as swimming and climbing. What’s more, he just liked staying at home and surfed the Internet. But now he is used to traveling and listening to music a lot. Finally, he didn’t do chores. And now he not only helps mum with housework, but also helps me with my homework.

I’m very proud of him. My mother and I are very happy that he has changed a lot. We’re sure that he must be very healthy and helpful. Our family must live a happier life in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求描述父亲的过去和现在，并且猜想家庭的未来生活。所以本文主要以第三人称书写。使用的动词时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。要适当使用一些连词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑。

【亮点说明】本文使用了一些连接词，为文章增色不少。如but，Not only…but also，Firstly，Finally等等。

考点：提纲作文。