Question

随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点	1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥护、劳累 2. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥护、劳累 3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多
缺点	1. 只看到图片，看不到商品本身 2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费

注意：①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；

②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；

③词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词汇：网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth; 商品goods; 导致cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

一、审题

本篇作文考查体裁为议论文。要求写一篇网上购物的文章，使用对比的方式，分析网购的利弊。

二、列举写作要点

1. “网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。

2. 优点

①足不出户；节约时间；避免拥护、劳累

②足不出户；节约时间；避免拥护、劳累

③可供选择的范围广，品种多

3. 缺点

①只看到图片，看不到商品本身

②容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费

4. 总结。

三、列出重点短语及句型

be used to, in our life, be interested in, go outdoors, get tried, shop in line, avoid doing sth, choose from, on one hand…on the other hand, different from, all in all