Question

假如你叫王芳，最近在网上交了一位来自英国的笔友Mary，请根据以下要点给Mary写一封不少于100词的e-mail，介绍自己的情况。
要点：
1.王芳，15岁，双子座(Gemini)，家住姜堰；
2.喜欢读书、旅游和交朋友；
3.最喜爱的颜色是红色，因为红色是一种强色，象征力量和强烈的情感;
4.对英语很感兴趣，会唱很多英文歌曲；
5.班里的一些同学也很想找外国笔友，希望得到帮助；
6.有机会希望去英国学习。
Dear Mary,
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Yours
Wang Fang

Answer 1

Dear Mary,
I am Wang Fang, a middle school student in Jiangyan, and I am 15 years old now. I am Gemini, so I am curious about everything. I like reading, traveling and making friends. I enjoy a lot communicating with others.
My favourite colour is red because red is a kind of strong colour. It represents power and strong feelings.
I’m interested in English, too. I can sing lots of English songs. And I think writing to you in English will help me a lot in learning English. By the way, my classmates want to make pen-friends with foreigners, too. I hope you can help them.
I hope I can study in Britain later. If I have a chance to your country, I hope to meet you.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Fang

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。