Question

在学习生活中，初中学生具有一些共同的优点和不足之处，请根据自己的观察和了解，结合以下要点，适当补充或举例说明，写一篇发言稿，谈谈如何做一名合格的中学生。注意：1.文中不能出现自己的真实校名和姓名。2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。3.80字左右，开头部分不计入字总数。要点包括以下内容：
1.Advantages: kind and helpful, energetic, ---
2.Disadvantages: impolite, careless ---
3.Your advice on being a good student (at least two pieces of advice)
Hello, everyone,
Today, I’m going to talk about how to be a good student. As middle school students, we own lots of good qualities. We are usually kind
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Answer 1

       
Hello, everyone,
Today, I’m going to talk about how to be a good student. As middle school students, we own lots of good qualities. We are usually kind and helpful. When people have difficulties and need help ,we are willing to give them a hand. We are energetic as well. We like doing sports and travelling. The most important thing is that most of us work hard in class and play happily after class.
However, we also have some disadvantages. Some of us are a little impolite. Sometimes some disagree on school rules with the teachers, some seldom talk with their parents and even quarrel with them. What’s more, we are so careless that we often make many mistakes in our studies and life.
In my opinion, we have grown up. It’s our duty to be polite and helpful. We should get used to the school life and work hard every day. We must take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve our abilities. It’s very necessary to talk with our parents and teachers when we are stressed. So boys and girls ,try our best to make your future better. That’s all. Thanks for listening.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：we are willing to give them a hand.我们愿意帮他们一把，We are energetic as well. 我们也精力充沛，like doing sports and travelling.喜欢运动、旅行，The most important thing最重要的事情，quarrel with them和他们争吵，What’s more还有，so careless that we often make many mistakes如此粗心以至于经常犯错，In my opinion以我的观点，It’s our duty to do sth.做……是我们的责任，take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve our abilities，积极参加各种各样的活动来提高我们的能力，It’s very necessary to talk with our parents and teachers when we are stressed.当我们有压力时有必要和父母老师谈一谈,等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。