Question

假如你是Tommy，你的朋友Jack给你来信，抱怨他的父母对他管得太严格了，请你结合自己家庭的情况，给他写一封回信，让Jack明白每个家庭都有家规，家规其实是父母对子女的爱护。

写作提示：

你家里有哪些家规（至少三点）。

你对这些家规的看法。

你对Jack 的建议。

要求：1. 必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；

2. 词数：80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Dear Jack,

In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules

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Yours,

Tommy

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules. So does mine. Let me tell you some rules of my family.

First, my parents stop me from watching TV on weekdays. It allow me have more time to do with my study as well as to do some outdoor activities. Second, they only allow me to play computer games for two hours at weekends. I agree that playing too much computer games is bad for us because we are easily addicted to it .Third, they ask me to do some housework at home, such as cleaning the floor, washing dishes after meals. In fact I agree that it is good to share housework with our parents and I enjoy doing housework. 

I think you could discuss your family rules with your parents and make the family rules together with them. As the saying goes: nothing can be accomplished without norms and standards. As a child, we should obey the rules in schools as well as at home. I believe that the rules will lead us to have a healthy and meaningful life.

Yours,

Tommy

【解析】

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

考点：应用文写作

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。