Question

书面表达 （本大题共10分）
假如你叫Mike，是无锡市某初级中学的一名九年级学生。今年11月22日是感恩节，为感谢师恩，学校将组织由学生推选“十佳教师”的评选活动。你计划写一封推荐信给校长Mr Smith，推荐你的老师Lucy当选，请你根据要点提示写一封电子邮件给Mr Smith。
内容提示见下表：

基本情况	英语教师；今年35岁；教过很多学生
性格特征	从不轻言放弃；有足够的耐心教我们说英语
突出事迹	曾帮助学生参加英语口语比赛并获得高的分数
个人愿望	1.想通过努力成为优秀教师，希望…… 2.想做志愿者工作，因为……

注意：
1.推荐信须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.表格中“个人愿望”一栏，请用自己的2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.词数80个左右，推荐信的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇：英语口语比赛 Spoken English Contest   志愿的 voluntary
Dear Mr Smith,                                                      
How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Lucy as one of the top ten teachers.                                                                        
                                                                                                                                                                     
                                                                               
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                               
                                                                             
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,
How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Lucy as one of the top ten teachers.She is an English teacher.She is thirty-five years old.She has taught a lot of students.She never gives up easily and she is patient enough to teach us to speak English.She once helped students (to) join in Spoken English Contest and they got high marks.
She wants to be an excellent teacher through hard work/after working hard.She hopes that her students will like her.She wants to do voluntary workbecause she wants to help more people in need.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件。由于给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。