Question

【题目】书面表达，上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论。

Simon率先发言：

1．想写自己的故事，在将来当一位作家：

2．最喜欢小说，每周花四个多小时阅读；

3．对各种各样的书都感兴趣，每次看后都会写读书报告；

4．好书是好朋友，可以增长我们的知识、帮助我们放松身心，也给我们打开一个新的世界。会努力实现梦想。

5．你的梦想是……

要求：1．要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。

2．最后一点要展开合理的想象，不少于2点。

3．词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone m ay want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

Simon wants to write his own stories and become a writer in the future. He likes novels best. He spends over four hours a week reading. He is interested in different types of books and he will write book reports after reading every time. Good books are good friends. They can improve our knowledge and help us relax. They also open up a whole new world to us. He will work hard to realize his dream.My dream is to study abroad one day. I really want to make more friends and learn more about the world.

When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。