Question

9．现在很多人喜欢在家里养狗和金鱼作为宠物，你知道怎么样照顾它们吗？请根据表格内容写一篇英语文章介绍如何照顾它们．

养狗	Dos	◆每天给它刷毛，使它保持干净； ◆傍晚带它外出遛一遛；
	Don'ts	◆不要带它到公共场所； ◆…
养金鱼	Dos	◆把它放入干净的水里； ◆给它喂特殊的鱼食，一天喂一次；
	Don'ts	◆不要把它放在太阳下； ◆不要喂太多； ◆…

参考词汇：公共场所 public places
要求：1．内容必须包括表格中内容，并进行适当拓展．
2．条理清楚，语句通顺．
3．词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．


Do you have a dog or a goldfish at home？If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean．Take it out for a walk in the evening．Don't take it to public places．Don't let it make a noise．
If you have a goldfish，put it in clean water．Give it special fish food and feed it once a day．Don't put it in the sun．Don't feed it too much．Don't pick it up with your hand．
Be a good master and they will be your good friends．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean．如果家里有狗，请每天刷毛并保持干净． 这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．
高分句型二  
Don't put it in the sun．不要把它放在阳光下．in the sun在阳光下．

解答 Do you have a dog or a goldfish at home？
If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean【高分句型一，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．Take it out for a walk in the evening．Don't take it to public places．Don't let it make a noise．【要点一，如何养狗】
If you have a goldfish，put it in clean water．Give it special fish food and feed it once a day．Don't put it in the sun【高分句型二，注意固定词组的使用】．Don't feed it too much．Don't pick it up with your hand．【要点二，如何养鱼】
Be a good master and they will be your good friends．

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．