Question

【题目】书面表达

请你以 A Trip to Wuxi为题写一篇短文，包括以下要点：

1. 上周末你和家人一起乘长途车去了无锡；

2. 你们在那呆了两天；

3. 第一天你们乘公交车去南禅寺(Nanchan Temple)，然后去锡惠公园(Xihui Park)，在那儿划船，爬山，吃午饭。饭后去太湖广场(Taihu Square)放风筝，看了著名的太湖风景，拍了许多照片；

4. 第二天，你们步行去市中心购物；

5. 你们玩得很开心，不会忘了这次兴奋的旅行。

A Trip to Wuxi

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Trip to Wuxi

My family and I went to Wuxi by coach last weekend. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went to Nanchan Temple by bus, and then we went to Xihui Park. There, we went boating, climbed the hills and had lunch. After lunch, we went to Taihu Square to fly kites there. We watched the views of the famous Tai Lake and took many photos. On the second day, we went to the centre of the city on foot to go shopping. We enjoyed ourselves. We’ll never forget this exciting trip.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯是一篇不错的短文。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。