Question

请以“My best friend ”为题，写一篇7.词左右的短文。
提示：1.王丽丽今年12岁，是七年级五班的学生；
2.他每天骑车上学。
3.最喜欢英语和音乐
4.喜欢唱歌、弹琴、看电影。
My best friend

Answer 1

My Best Friend 
My best friend is Wang Lili .She is a 12-year-old girl .She studies in Class Five ,Grade Seven with me .Every day ,we ride to school together .She likes English very much .So she always helps me work out some difficult English problems .She is good at music .In her spare time ,she enjoys listening to music and playing the piano .She also likes films ,especially the latest English films .This is my best friend ,a girl who has many hobbies .

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我最好的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is…，She likes…及she enjoys…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍她和我在一起的活动，最后介绍她的爱好。此处用了work out，is good at ，in her spare time , enjoys listening to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。