Question

18．假如你叫鸸•是英语学习小组组长：英语课上老师要求展开小组调查．内容包括爱 好、理想职业及原因•然后由各组组长在班内汇报：柄根据表格内容提示•介绍木组成员 及自己的情况，写一篇80-100词的调查汇报．
Survey

Names	Hobbies	Dream jobs	Reasons
Yi Ke	writing	writer	bring her pleasure and success
Zheng Yong	travelling	guide	experience life and learn about different cultures
Meng Xin	looking after animals	WWF worker	help animals live in peace
I（Xiao Peng）	…	…	…

要求：
1．语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams．Now let me share ours with you．        ．
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and dreams can come true．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When she grows up，she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace．
句中"When she grows up"为时间状语从句，句中使用短语有："grow up 长大"、"want to do sth 想做某事"、"in danger 处于危险之中"、"help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事"．这句话意为：当她长大，她想成为世界自然基金会的工作者来拯救濒临危险的动物，帮助动物平安成长．
高分句型二：
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true．
句中"we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true"为宾语从句，句中短语有："come true 实现"．这句话意为：我希望我们能够享受我们的梦想，并能梦想成真．

解答 Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams．Now let me share ours with you．（开篇点题）
Yi Ke s hobby is writing．She wants to be a successful writer in the future，just like Mo Yan．Her story came out as a book in 2012．So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success．
Zheng Yong likes travelling best．He is looking forward to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries．In this way，he can experience different life and learn about different cultures．
Meng Xin is a kind girl and her hobby is looking after animals．When she grows up，she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace．【高分句型一】（小组成员们的梦想及原因）
My dream is to work on the Helpline because I like communicating with others．I can solve problems for them and it makes me happy and pleased．（我的梦想）
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true．【高分句型二】（希望梦想成真）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．