Question

1．安全对每个人都很重要．请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文．
提示：1．体育锻炼
       2．上下楼梯
       3．交朋结友
       4．食品卫生
要求：1．语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；
       2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点．
       3．词数：80-100词．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students．（体育锻炼中的安全）First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（上下楼梯的安全）Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（交朋结友的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight．（食品卫生中的安全）Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．
（总结概括）In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文．结合要点提示，可知本文主要从四个方面进行叙述，1．体育锻炼2．上下楼梯3．交朋结友4．食品卫生．注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥．根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态是一般现在时，第一人称为主．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．
重点词汇和短语：First，．Second．Third．Last but not least首先，第二，第三，最后但同样重要的
get on well with 和…相处的好
keep away from远离…
be harmful to对…有害
in a word总之
 等等

解答 Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students． First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（体育锻炼中的安全） Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（上下楼梯的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight． （交朋结友的安全） Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．（食品卫生中的安全） （高分句型）
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all． （总结概括） （高分句型）

点评 做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．