Question

15．B．图示作文：请根据图片内容写一篇文章．

作文要求：1、话题作文或图示作文任选其一．
2、要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥．
3、词数80--100
Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books． His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．Instead，he went to the net bar．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes．他的父母不愿意让他玩游戏，因为那对眼睛不好．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
  高分句型二
Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．小明拿到钱后没有去书店．这是 after 引导的时间状语从句，在…之后．

解答 Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes【高分句型一，注意原因状语从句的使用】，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books．【要点一，描述图片一】His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．【要点二，描述图片二】Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．Instead，he went to the net bar．【要点三，描述图片三】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．