Question

8．中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论暑假的学习和生活计划．同学们提出到国外旅游，假如你是李华，请根据以下内容用英语向给同学们做个汇报．
内容要点：

Tips for travelling abroad
前期准备	根据天气准备衣物及必备证件；…（请自拟一点）
注意安全	交通安全，注意防盗，…（请自拟一点）
文明礼仪	公共场合不大声喧哗，不插队，不随手扔垃圾；…（请自拟一点）
你的建议	请自拟一点

要求：1．词数100个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．所写内容必须包括表格中的所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．
参考词汇：身份证 ID card； 举止文明的 well-behaved
Tips for travelling abroad
Boys and girls!The summer holiday is coming．I think it's a good idea to travel abroad．How can we enjoy ourselves？Here are some tips．
Before you leave，you'd better learn about the weather and prepare enough clothes．Remember to take your ID card and passport．Make sure you take enough money．
During travelling，safety must come first．First of all，follow traffic rules all the time．Second，try to keep your things in good order and take good care of them．Third，it's better to take some medicine with you if necessary．
What's more，always try to be a well-behaved tourist．In public places，remember to keep your voice down．Don't push in before others and don't drop litter carelessly．Read public signs carefully before entering some tourist attractions．
In my opinion，it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country you will visit．Just as the saying goes，"when in Rome，do as the Romans do．"

I hope these tips may be helpful to you!
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈国外旅游的前期准备以及一些注意事项并给出自己的建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1前期准备：根据天气准备衣物及必备证件；…（请自拟一点）
2注意安全：交通安全，注意防盗，…（请自拟一点）
3文明礼仪：公共场合不大声喧哗，不插队，不随手扔垃圾；…（请自拟一点）
4我的建议：请自拟一点
常用到的重点短语：
make sure 确信
all the time一直
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
take  care of 照顾
what's more再者
push in插队
in one's opinion依某人看来
高分句型：
1．Third，①it's better to take some medicine with you②if necessary．
①it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
②if necessary是一个省略句，完整表达是if it is necessary如果必要的话
2．①In my opinion，②it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country③you will visit．
①in one's opinion依某人看来
②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
③you will visit是一个定语从句，修饰先行词country，关系词which或that做定语从句的宾语，故省略．

解答 Tips for travelling abroad
Boys and girls!The summer holiday is coming．I think it's a good idea to travel abroad．How can we enjoy ourselves？Here are some tips．
Before you leave，you'd better learn about the weather and prepare enough clothes．Remember to take your ID card and passport．Make sure you take enough money．（前期准备）
During travelling，safety must come first．First of all，follow traffic rules all the time．Second，try to keep your things in good order and take good care of them．Third，it's better to take some medicine with you if necessary．（高分句型）（注意安全）
What's more，always try to be a well-behaved tourist．In public places，remember to keep your voice down．Don't push in before others and don't drop litter carelessly．Read public signs carefully before entering some tourist attractions．（文明礼仪）
In my opinion，it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country you will visit．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"when in Rome，do as the Romans do．"（我的建议）
I hope these tips may be helpful to you!
That's all．Thank you!

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．