Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下表提示写一篇题为“My pleasant trip to Beijing”的文章，不少于80词。

	Main points(要点)	Details(细节)
Place	Beijing
Time	last summer holiday
People	my parents and I
Experience	1)sightseeing(places of interest) (2)food/shopping	t the Palace Museum , Tian’anmen Square(biggest), the Great Wall(wonderful), Beijing Duck, Wangfujing Street
Feeling	excited, happy, tired	want to visit again

My Pleasant Trip to Beijing

Answer 1

【答案】

My pleasant trip in Beijing

Last summer holiday I went to Beijing with my parents. It took us about two hours to get there by air.Although the weather was hot, we spent three days there.

As soon as we arrived in Beijing, we went to Tian'anmen Square. It is the biggest square in the world.

The next day we visited the Palace Museum. On the third day we went to the Great Wall. It is wonderful.

We enjoyed the famous Beijing Duck. Mum did some shopping in Wangfujing Street. She bought some souvenirs for my cousins.

We were excited and happy although we were a little tired. I wish to visit here again one day.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己去北京的旅行，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如 We enjoyed the famous Beijing Duck. Mum did some shopping in Wangfujing Street. She bought some souvenirs for my cousins. We were excited and happy although we were a little tired. I wish to visit here again one day. 等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。