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3．假如你是李冰，你美国的笔友Mike遇到了一个难题，发邮件向你求助．请回封邮件，写出个人看法，并提出解决问题的建议．
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Dear Li Bing， I'm so sad．This morning on my way home I saw an old man lying on the ground．He was badly hurt．I quickly took him to the hospital．But his daughter thought it was me hurt his father and she said many dirty words and was very angry with me…I don't know whether I will help others in the future？Can you help me？ Yours， Mike

Dear Mike，
I have received your e-mail recently．I can understand you．I think you are right．I hope you can help others as possible as you can．【高分句型一】I can give you some advice．（开篇点题）
First when you meet such things，you'd better call 110 to ask the policeman for help．Besides you should try to explain to his daughter，I think maybe she didn't know the reason and was justtoo worried．What's more，don't think more about that．I think you did right，sooner or later she will understand you and thank you．（提出建议）
I hope you can go on helping people in trouble．If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（再次阐述自己的观点）．
I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours，
Li Bing．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I hope you can help others as possible as you can．
句中"you can help others as possible as you can"为宾语从句，句中"as possible as you can"意为"尽可能地…"．这句话意为：我希望你可以尽可能地帮助别人．
高分句型二：
If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．
句中"If everyone can give a hand to others"为条件状语从句，句中短语有"give a hand to sb 帮助某人"、"比较级+and+比较级  越来越…"．这句话意为：如果每个人都能帮助别人，这个世界会变得越来越美好．

解答 Dear Mike，
    I have received your e-mail recently．I can understand you．I think you are right．I hope you can help others as possible as you can．【高分句型一】I can give you some advice．（开篇点题）
    First when you meet such things，you'd better call 110 to ask the policeman for help．Besides you should try to explain to his daughter，I think maybe she didn't know the reason and  was just too worried．What's more，don't think more about that．I think you did right，sooner or later she will understand you and thank you．（提出建议）
    I hope you can go on helping people in trouble．If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（再次阐述自己的观点）
    I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours，
Li Bing

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