Question

书面表达

你的朋友Peter看到了你国庆期间游览天马山时拍的相片，询问你游天马山的经历。请你根据以下提示，将游览经历写成一篇不少于80词的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。要求语句通顺，可适当发挥，不能逐句翻译。

1. 天马山空气清新，以其优美的景色而著称，如：瀑布、绿草、花朵……

2. 你和家人一个小时就爬上了山顶, 并在山顶玩游戏、唱歌、野餐；

3. 下午五点回到家，感觉累，但很开心。

During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. __________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. Mount Tianma is a famous place that has many beautiful views, such as waterfalls, green grass and nice flowers. And the air in Mount Tianma is quite clear.

It took us an hour to climb up to the top. What a beautiful view we saw at the top! We played games, sang songs and then had a picnic there.

We got home at about 5:00 pm. Although we felt tired, we had a great time. I hope I can go there again. 

【解析】这是一片给材料作文，根据提示将游览经历写成短文，作者运用一般过去时叙述了天马山的景点，以及再爬山的经过，最后还说明了自己的感受，语句通顺，符合逻辑。