Question

假如你是刘岚，Linda是两年前就读你学校的交换生，昨天你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据下面的邮件及提示内容，绐她回一封邮件。

Dear Liu Lan,

Long time no see! How is everything going? I miss you very much. I think you must be more beautiful now. Write and tell me what you look like now.

Yours,

Linda

提示：1. 比以前长高了，更健康了。

2. 看电视、玩电脑的时间少了，学习的时间多了。

3. 性格变得外向了，交了很多朋友。

要求：l. 语句通顺，语意连贯。 2. 用上所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

3. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 70词左右。

Dear Linda,

Long time no see! I also miss you very much.

 

 

Come to visit me if you are free.

Yours,

Liu Lan

 

Answer 1

Dear Linda,

Long time no see! I also miss you very much. I am very glad to receive you letter and I am willing to tell you some changes on me. Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier. I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games, but now I have changed a lot. I prefer to spend time on my study. At the same time, I have been more outgoing and easygoing. I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them. I am so happy that I have changed so many!

Come to visit me if you are free.

Yours,

Liu Lan

【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合，更能加强作品的可读性。

【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。

考点：提纲作文。