Question

12．微笑是一种人生态度．请你以"Learn to Smile"为题，为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件．
内容要点包括：
（1）学会对自己微笑；
（2）学会对他人微笑；
（3）微笑是一种语言．
注意：
（1）紧扣主题，表述全面、准确、流畅；
（2）词数：80-100；
（3）文章中不要出现真实姓名和校名．
参考词汇：态度attitude；自信心confidence

Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life．We should face everything with smile．
In our life，there may be something unpleasant．For example，you fail in an exam； or you are misunderstood by your friends．These things may make you feel bad．Then what will you do？Why not learn to smile？Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings．Sometimes，the greatest enemy is yourself．Most important of all，smiling benefits your health．
We should also learn to smile to others，and it will help us to get closer to other people．Therefore，smile is the most widely understood language．
Let's learn to smile．I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件．以"Learn to Smile"为题，写一篇英语短文，因此人称应该用第一人称和第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时．
写作思路：本文的写作要点主要包括：（1）学会对自己微笑；（2）学会对他人微笑；（3）微笑是一种语言；
重点句型及短语：Why not do sth？为什么不…Most important of all最重要的是，learn to学会做某事，help sb to帮助某人做某事，therefore因此等

解答 答案：
Smile is an attitude to life．We should face everything with smile．
In our life，there may be something unpleasant．For example，you fail in an exam； or you are misunderstood by your friends．These things may make you feel bad．Then what will you do？Why not learn to smile？（生活中的困境）Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings．Sometimes，the greatest enemy is yourself．Most important of all，smiling benefits your health．（学会对自己微笑）（高分句型）．
We should also learn to smile to others，and it will help us to get closer to other people．（学会对他人微笑）Therefore，smile is the most widely understood language．（微笑是一种语言）
Let's learn to smile．I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier（号召）（高分句型）．

点评 此题为材料作文．先仔细审题，把握好文章的体裁和主要内容，并要确定好其重点，做到重点突出，主次分明．把握好文章的时态和人称，这些是最基本的东西．在此基础上可以在文章中使用一些不同的表达和句式，让文章内容更加丰富，语言更富有变化．作文过程中要尽量使用有把握的表达方式，避免出现一些不必要的错误影响分数．还要注意卷面，书写一定要规范．