Question

【题目】 书面表达（15分））

最近你和你的同学就“中学生目前存在的问题”展开了讨论。 现在请你以此为话题， 参照表内提供的信息，写一篇短文。

Problems	Causes	Advice
1.argue with parents	--------	have a talk with parents, understand each other
2.can’t sleep well before exams	anxious about grades	--------
3.feel lonely	-------	--------

注意：

开头部分已写好，你只需接着写。

所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，和你所补全的信息。

词数：不少于80个。

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems.

Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents. That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other.

Some say they can’t sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades. They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed.

Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends. As the only kid in the family, students should take part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍中学生目前存在的问题，问题出现的原因及其解决问题的建议。小作者把自己的观点介绍的比较清楚。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other.