Question

书面表达 （10分）

以My Vacation为题，展开想象，描述一下你的假期。70词左右。内容包括：

时间、人物、地点、做了什么和你的感想。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My vacation

My vacation was very interesting. I did many things such as did my homework, played table tennis, watched TV and so on. On Sundays, I often visit my grandparents with my parents. Sometimes I went shopping with my mother.

One day, I went to a shopping center with my mother. The shopping center wasn’t far from my home. It took us about ten minutes to get there on foot. The shopping center was very big. There were all kinds of things. Every day a lot of people go there to buy things. After staying in the shopping center for about two hours, we got all the things and walked home.

Although I felt very tired, I was very happy because I can help my mother do something.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇开放式的作文，题目要求我们以My vacation为题，描述一下自己的假期。谈论如何度过假期的这个话题在我们的教材上出现过，我们也相应的学过一些有关的句型。这里我们主要练习的是一般过去时态的使用，因为我们记叙的这些事情都是过去的，已经发生过了。还有一些假期中可能从事的活动的短语，如play basketball, went to the beach, visited museums, went camping等。我们可以展开想象，结合自己的实际情况来表达。题目中要求要有详细的时间、地点、和什么人、做了什么事，所以我们要记叙一次具体的经历，还要有自己的感想。写作时要注意短文整天意思的连贯，多使用一些连词和句型，使文章流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文，短文中作者描写了自己的假期是怎样度过的，有大体上的概括，也有具体的描述。首先第一段中作者从总体上讲述了自己在假期中所做的事情，I did many things such as did my homework, played table tennis, watched TV and so on. On Sundays, I often visit my grandparents with my parents，这里用到了such as 这个短语来进行举例。第二段中作者具体描述了和妈妈去购物的场景，这一部分中意思连贯，表达流畅。也使用了一些较好的句式，如It took us about ten minutes to get there on foot.、After staying in the shopping center for about two hours, we got all the things and walked home等。最后是作者的感想，简单的叙述了自己对假期和妈妈购物这件事情的感想。整篇文章意思完整，句式准确。

考点：开放式作文。