Question

14．你有了梦想，可这个梦想和你父母的愿望不一致，你将如何与父母沟通？请根据以下提示给你父母写一封信．

要求：1）80词左右（文中已给出部分不计入总次数，不必抄写到答题卡上．）
              2）提示词必须全部用上，并适当发挥
              3）注意行文流畅，不必逐句翻译
参考词汇：active； smart； do better in； both…and…
Dear Mum and Dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．I am so thankful for your love．
       I'm so thankful for you love．
                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                lovely．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up． 我擅长打篮球，长大后我想当一名篮球运动员．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．我会尽最大努力在学习和篮球方面做得更好．try one's best to do sth．尽某人最大的努力做某事，do better in做的更好． both…and…两个都…．

解答 Dear mum and dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，【要点一，向父母表示感谢】I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming【要点二，说明自己的梦想】．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball【高分句型二，注意固定词组的使用】．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．【要点三，表明决心】I am so thankful for your love．
Yours，
lovely．

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