Question

10．假如你是李东，你们学校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席，你想参选．请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿．

个人优势	性格、特长…
学习方法	英语歌曲、电影…
活动设想	英语晚会、演讲比赛、才艺展示
当选愿望	…

要求：（1）词数控制在80～100，可适当发挥；
（2）不能出现真实的校名及姓名；
（3）开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My name is Li Dong．I want to run for the new president of the English club．
I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with．I like to help others．And I have the ability to deal with difficulties．I'm good at English，especially spoken English．I often learn English by watching English movies，listening to English songs and reading different kinds of English books．
I have some new ideas about the club's activities，such as holding evening parties or organizing English talent shows to make our school life more colorful．We can also hold some English speech contests to improve our English．
I really hope to be the president of the club．If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well．Please give me a chance!
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with我是一个外向，活泼，易相处的人．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰person．
【高分句型二】
If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well如果你选择我，我会很活跃，有创造力，为你们服务．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的原则．

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My name is Li Dong．I want to run for the new president of the English club．I'm a person who is outgoing，active and easy to get on with．【高分句型一】I like to help others．And I have the ability to deal with difficulties．（个人优势）I'm good at English，especially spoken English．I often learn English by watching English movies，listening to English songs and reading different kinds of English books．（学习方法）
I have some new ideas about the club's activities，such as holding evening parties or organizing English talent shows to make our school life more colorful．We can also hold some English speech contests to improve our English．（活动设想）
I really hope to be the president of the club．If you choose me，I will be active，creative and serve you well．【高分句型二】Please give me a chance!（当选愿望）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．