Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如王益是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍王益的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）

提示语：

1. 王益以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是冯小刚；

2. 王益现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；

3. 上周五是王益的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Yi is my good friend. He has a lot of hobbies. He used to be a movie fan and went to the movies at least twice a week. Even he sometimes rent VCD at home watching. His favorite movie star is Feng Xiaogang.

But now his hobby is collecting stamps. He thinks stamp collecting is interesting. He can learn a great deal of knowledge from stamps about people, places, history and some old stamps are very valuable;

Last Friday is Wang's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends so he felt very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要介绍好朋友的爱好情况。根据提示，主要介绍过去的爱好及现在的爱好，可以用过去时态或者used to介绍过去的爱好，用一般现在时介绍现在的爱好。周五的生日情况用一般过去时态。在写作中注意主语和谓语的一致性。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容全面，王益过去的爱好，现在的爱好，周五过生日收到的礼物。一个but就从过去的爱好转到了现在的爱好的介绍。语言连贯，层次分明。