Question

【题目】书面表达。

下面是李雷的个人档案，请根据档案的内容对他做一个简介。

Name：Li Lei Age：14 Likes：basketball，swimming，drawing，music Favorite Star：Michael Jordan Favorite food：fish and chips Appearance：short and straight hair，big eyes，medium height Wants：a basketball player

I have a good friend.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I have a good friend. His name is Li Lei. He is 14 years old. He is tall and has straight hair. He has big eyes and he is of medium height. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He is good at drawing and he likes to listen to music. His favorite star is Michael Jordan. He wants to be a basketball player. He loves fish and chips. He thinks they are delicious. We often have fun together.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友李雷。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：His name is…，He is..., He has..., He likes..., His favorite star is....,He wants to be....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意在文后表达我和李雷在一起玩得高兴。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍他的姓名，长相，洗好，最后介绍我们在一起玩得高兴。此处like doing sth, play basketball, be good at, like to do sth, want to do sth, have fun等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。