Question

书面表达（15分）

人的一生应以自信、自强、自立为重，请以“Believe yourself, and you will win！”为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到困难并战胜困难的文章。

要求：1.切合题意，内容完整；

2.表达清楚，书写规范；

3.词数不少于80个。

（提示：1.你遇到了什么困难？2.你是如何克服困难的？3.你从中体会到什么？）

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Believe myself, and I will win

As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

In fact, when I was a child, I always feel sad or nervous about the difficulties in my life .Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way, they also told me that I should be confident.

Now, I'm no longer a child and I begin to know the real meaning of my parents’ words. To be confident means I should believe myself. If I do that, I will become a happy and brave person.

Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!

Believe myself, and a beautiful future is waiting for me.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Believe myself, and I will win为题目写一篇作文，在作文中记叙自己在学习或生活中遇到的困难，以及最终战胜困难的短文。这篇作文的中心有两个，一是记叙自己的一次战胜困难的经历，这个经历让自己有了自信。所以在选材的时候要注意符合作文的主题；另一个中心是只要相信自己，就能胜利。题目中并没有给我们规定具体写什么，这是设了一个主题，所以具体的内容还是需要我们自己发挥的。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第一人称。写作时，要注意不同时态的转换和动词的正确形式。另外还需要注意句式的变化，词汇和高级句型的使用，以使文章表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文，作者通过举例，告诉我们，我们只有相信自己，在生活中才能取得成功。首先作者使用了一句谚语Where there is a will, there is a way 来开始自己的作文。这句“有志者，事竟成”是一个名言，放在这里也比较合适，点明了文章的主题。第二段中作者描写了自己小时候的经历，always feel sad or nervous about the difficulties in my life，并在父母的鼓励下开始有了自信，hen my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way, they also told me that I should be confident。这一段的描写有些笼统，如果能举一个具体的实例会更好。接下来作者着重写的是自信对我们的影响，to be confident means I should believe myself. If I do that, I will become a happy and brave person、I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!。这一部分使用的句型比较丰富，如非谓语动词、状语从句、宾语从句等。

考点：开放式作文。