Question

短文写作：8%

为自己设计一个旅行计划，要包括下列问题：

1. 想去哪？为什么？

2. 想在那儿待几天？

3. 怎么去？

4. 打算什么时候开始旅行？

5. 在这次旅行期间，打算做些什么？

要求：意思连贯、通顺，词数在60—80之间。

提示词语：countryside, air, food and vegetables, environment, fresh, quiet, poor, give, the school things ...

Make a travel plan

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Make a travel plan

Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. I will go to play three days. Because the air is fresh, the sky is blue, the river is clear. In the countryside, we can eat delicious food and green vegetables. The environment is quite good and quiet. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there. We are going to help the farmers there and do some farm work. We also want to plant many young trees to make the countryside more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般将来时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般将来时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。