Question

4．今年四月份，乐清市启动了"文明餐桌行动"，号召全体市民"文明用餐，节俭惜福"．请结合图片，联系实际，适当发挥，以"Save Food and Eat Healthily"为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数


                  Save Food And Eat Healthily
Yueqing government（政府） has called on all the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
To save food，weshouldn't waste any of our food．Wasting too much is quite common nowadays．The food that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，which is a serious waste．Instead，we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．Besides，junk food is something popular among young people．In fact，it really does harm to our health．So it's really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet．Only when we eat healthily，can we be energetic enough to study and work well．
All in all，keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do，which can save food and make us eat healthily．So，let's do it from now!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是说明图片中所陈述的现象，说明浪费现象很严重，然后说明我们改如何做．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；浪费太多，吃光食物，吃垃圾食物，饮食平衡
2．我们该怎么做；
 
常用到的重点短语：
eat up 吃光
be supposed to 应该
do harm to 对…有害
all in all 总之

【高分句型】
1．The food ①that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，②which is a serious waste．
①that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词the food，that作为从句的宾语．
②which引导的非限制定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
2．Instead，we ①are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates②so that we can save ③both food and our own money．
①be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
③both…and…两者都
3．①Only when we eat healthily，can we be②energetic enough to study and work well．
①only+从句放句首引起倒装．
②adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事

解答 Save Food And Eat Healthily
    Yueqing government（政府） has called on all the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．Wasting too much is quite common nowadays．The food that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，which is a serious waste．【高分句型】Instead，we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．【高分句型】Besides，junk food is something popular among young people．In fact，it really does harm to our health．So it's really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet．Only when we eat healthily，can we be energetic enough to study and work well．【高分句型】（描述图画）
All in all，keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do，which can save food and make us eat healthily．So，let's do it from now!（我们该怎么做）

点评 本文的写作首先说明图片中所陈述的现象，说明浪费现象很严重，然后说明我们改如何做we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．然后对青少年喜欢吃垃圾食品进行陈述，说明我们应该有平衡额饮食eat a balanced diet．最后进行总结，号召大家一起现在就行动起来let's do it from now!
初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式如have a  far-reaching effect on sth对…有深远的影响，only 置于句首的倒装及only when …，can we…等．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．