Question

最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼” Speak out your worries 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。

2、词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Speak out your worries

Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．

About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．

Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．

【解析】

试题分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的烦恼。结合所给材料，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，文后注意提出自己的建议。本文主要是一般现在时态，人称多为第一三人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词，注意运用所给短语，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连词。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。