Question

10．最近你班上的同学都在为毕业后是否出国读书展开了热烈的讨论，请根据以下要点提示谈谈出国读书的优点和缺点，并将你的选择及理由告诉同学．

注意：1、词数80左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
2、不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
These days，our classmates are having a hot discussion about studying abroad．               
This is my choice，will you agree with me？

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容为根据图表中所提示的内容要点用英语写一篇关于"谈谈出国读书的优点和缺点"的短文．时态为一般现在时．人称为第一人称．
高分句型：
①if I go abroad，I will have to leave my family and be far away from my friends．如果我出国，我将不得不离开我的家人，远离我的朋友．句子中if引导一个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时，have to，不得不，后面跟动词原形，be far away from 远离．
②So in my opinion，it's better for me to go on studying in my own country，因此，在我看来，最好是我继续在国内学习．in my opinion，在我看来；it's better for me to do sth做某事更好一些，it作形式主语，后面的to引导的不定式作真正的主语；go on studying 继续学习，后面跟动词的ing形式．

解答 These days，our class are having a hot discussion about studying abroad．As I know，it has both advantages and disadvantages．On one hand，students in foreign countries may have less homework，so they can have more free time．What's more，there are fewer people in these countries so the air will be cleaner and the environment will be better．（出国读书的优点）
However，studying abroad is really expensive．I must do some part-time to make money for my daily use．Besides，if I go abroad，I will have to leave my family and be far away from my friends（高分句型）．If so，can I study well and will I feel happy？（出国读书的缺点）
My parents do not have much money and I don't want to stay too far away from them．So in my opinion，it's better for me to go on studying in my own country（高分句型）．This is my choice，will you agree with me？（我的选择及理由）

点评 这是一篇图表作文，所给材料比较详细，且都用英语给出，故只需要将这些材料按照一定的逻辑顺序组织成文即可．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性．