Question

写一篇请求加入观鸟协会的申请（80字左右）

你叫李明，阳光中学八年级学生

最喜爱的科目是生物，对各种鸟类植物感兴趣

想成为观鸟协会的一员，了解更多鸟类知识

做点事保护鸟类，星期日下午2-5点可以参加活动

Dear Chairperson ,

I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.

First,__________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.

Yours sincerely,

Liming

 

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson ,

I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.

First，My favourite subject is biology at school，I’m interested in all kinds of birds. I think interest is best teacher.But the knowledge about birds is less in biology class. I want to know more about birds.

Second，some people killed birds and they don’t know the importance of protecting the birds. The kinds of birds are smaller and smaller. In order to keep the balance of nature, I should try my best toprotect birds and our environment.I have lots of time to work on Sundays.

I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.

yours sincerely,

Liming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一封申请信，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是在信中介绍自己的兴趣和保护鸟类的决心，注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：I’m interested in all kinds of birds. I think interest is best teacher. In order to keep the balance of nature, I should try my best to protect birds and our environment.等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：First，Second等。

考点：提纲作文。