Question

【题目】书面表达。（10分）

人人都有爱好，请你介绍一下自己的爱好是什么，它给你带来了哪些乐趣。

要求：短文不得少于70词；不得写出真实姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

My hobby

Everyone has his own hobby，it may give us a lot of happiness.For example，build model ships，play basketball，raise pets and so on.Then what’s my hobby？My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I’m not good at it，I often lose myself in it.When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down.When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to musici？If not，I hope you can have a try，you’ll find it so good.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，来介绍一下自己的爱好的文章。本文以听音乐为自己的爱好，介绍听音乐的好处。能够清楚地表述自己的观点和想法，写作时应注意要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，用一般现在时，以第一人称来叙述。。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，短文用了排比句，为文章增色不少，如：When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down.When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again.，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。