Question

书面表达（本大题共10分）

假设你是Tom, 你的朋友Millie遇到了一些问题，想听听你的意见。请根据以下要点提示，回一封信给Millie，帮助她解决问题。

要点：1. 你了解到Millie在学习大部分功课上挺费劲。

2. 她经常被同学看不起，没有亲密的朋友可以交谈。

3. 她的父母只关心分数，阻止她放学后打排球。她很不开心。

4. 建议------

注意：1. 第4要点的内容须用3-4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

2. 词数80个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Millie,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I know that you _________________________________________

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I hope my advice will be of some value to you.

Best wishes

Tom

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Millie,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I know that you have great difficulty learning most of your lessons. You are often looked down on by your classmates. You also have no close friends to talk to. Your parents care only about your marks. They prevent/ stop you playing volleyball after school. You are very unhappy. I hope you will study harder to make great progress in your lessons. You should have more communication with your parents and talk to them about your problems. You can try to make friends with your classmates, too. (You can spend some time on your hobbies, but you should achieve a balance between study and hobbies.)

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【解析】

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

考点：考查应用文的写作

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。