Question

10．请以Believe myself，and I will win!为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到并战胜困难的短文，跟大家分享一下你成长的经历．
（1）写作提示：1）你遇到过什么困难？
2）你是如何克服困难的？
3）你从此事中体会到了什么？
（2）写作要求：
短文的内容应包含所提示的要点．语言要流畅．可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使短文的意思连贯；短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；短文的词数在90词左右．
Believe myself，and I will win
Last night after I had my supper，I went to do my math homework．I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour，but the last one was the most difficult of all．I tried many ways，but I still couldn't work it out．An hour later，I wanted to give up．But my father told me to keep on working．I worked it out with the help of my father at last．I smiled，and so did my father．From that I know nothing in the world is impossible if I set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以Believe myself，and I will win!为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到并战胜困难的短文．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）你遇到过什么困难？
2）你是如何克服困难的？
3）你从此事中体会到了什么？

常用到的重点短语：
work out 解答出
give up 放弃
keep on doing sth 继续做某事
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
set one's  mind to do 下定决心做某事

【高分句型】
1．I smiled，and so did my father．
so+助动词+主语，表示某人也一样．
2．From that I know nothing in the world is impossible ①if I ②set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．
①if引导的条件状语从句．
②set one's  mind to do 下定决心做某事

解答 Believe myself，and I will win!
Last night after I had my supper，I went to do my math homework．I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour，but the last one was the most difficult of all．（遇到过什么困难）I tried many ways，but I still couldn't work it out．An hour later，I wanted to give up．But my father told me to keep on working．I worked it out with the help of my father at last．（如何克服困难的）I smiled，and so did my father．【高分句型】From that I know nothing in the world is impossible if I set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．【高分句型】（体会）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．