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请你根据个人信息档案,写一篇英语短文介绍你刚刚认识的新同学张华。

  Name

   Zhang Hua

  Age

   12

  Birthplace

   Zhenjiang

  Be like

   not very tall;

have black, long hair; big eyes

  School            

   No. 4 Middle School

  Class

   Class 3, Grade 7

  Be good at

   Math and English

  Hobbies

   swimming

 After-school activities

   play tennis, reading

要求: 1. 词数不少于60词,开头已写好,不计入总词数;

           2. 内容必须包括上表所有要点,可以适当发挥;

           3. 条理清楚,语意连贯,书写整洁。

Hello, everyone! This is my new classmate Zhang Hua.                             

                                                                             

                                                                            

                                                                             

 

【答案】

 

Hello, everyone! This is my new classmate Zhang Hua. He’s 12 years old. He was born in Zhenjiang but he lives in Jurong with his parents.

He’s not very tall. He has black, long hair and he has big eyes. He studies at No.4 Middle School. He is in Class 3, Grade7. He’s good at Maths and English. He likes swimming and he’s in the Swimming Club. There are many after-school activities every day. He often plays tennis with us. Sometimes he does some reading in the school library.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。作文要求介绍一个新同学,并且列出了该同学的详细信息,如姓名、年龄、出生地等。在写作中,我们要把给出的这些材料组成句子。文章课采用第三人称,用一般现在时。在写作时,注意不要漏掉相关信息,可适当发挥。尤其注意主谓一致。

【亮点说明】

这篇文章充分利用所给信息,并适当加入一些句子使内容不再是简单的堆砌,而显得很有条理。如There are many after-school activities every day每天有很多课外活动。这句话很自然得引出了下面的内容;另外加入了一些表频率的词如often,sometimes,使文章更紧凑,顺畅。

考点:提纲作文。

 

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