Question

17．当前，全市各学校正开展"好书伴我成长"活动．请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以"Growing up with good books"为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议．

读书的益处	获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐．
存在的现象	听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间．
发出倡议	多读书，读经典好书．向世界传播中国传统文化． 让读书成为我们生活的一部分

要求：
（1）倡议书应包括所有要点；
（2）倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Growing up with good books
My dear friends，
Reading is very important．（益处）We can get knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds，but also make us clever and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more good books．The more we read，the more we will learn，and the brighter our future will become．
（现象）However，some students spend much time in listening to music，watching TV or going on line to play games．It takes much of their spare time．（倡议）So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world．
Let's start reading now．And let it become a part of our life!．

Answer 1

分析 首先我们应该注意文章的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式．其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态．用第三人称和第一人称，再次要注意内容要点，有三点：1．读书的益处．2．存在的现象．3．发出倡议．不要有漏啦．最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力．重点短语和句型：not only …but also …，The more…the more，spend much time in，so that等

解答 答案：
My dear friends，
Reading is very important．（益处）We can get knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds，but also make us clever and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more good books．The more we read，the more we will learn，and the brighter our future will become．
（现象）However，some students spend much time in listening to music，watching TV or going on line to play games．It takes much of their spare time．（倡议）So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world．
Let's start reading now．And let it become a part of our life!

点评 提纲类型的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．