Question

【题目】书面表达。( 10分)

Eric 要写一封电子邮件给自己的网友介绍自己的家和家乡。

1. 你家离市中心大约5公里，骑车只要10分钟。那儿有个公园。你可以在公园里锻炼，也能闻到花香，听到小鸟唱歌。.

2. 你住在有20幢高楼的居民区。你的邻居们友好，乐于助人。他们帮助你们解决各种困难。

3. 你住在4楼，有一个大客厅，干净的餐厅和舒适的卧室。

4. 你认为这是一个居住的好地方。希望她能来参观。

要求：1．语句通顺、语言规范。2．书写，工整、标点符号正确。3．80词左右。

Dear Millie,

I want to introduce my hometown to you.

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Yours,

Eric

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Millie,

I want to introduce my hometown to you. My home is about 5 kilometers from the city center. It takes 10 minutes by bike. There is a park there. I can do exercise in the park. I can also smell the flowers and hear the birds sing.

There are 20 buildings in my neighbourhood. My neighbours are kind and helpful. They often help us with all kinds of problems.

I live on the fourth floor. There is a big sitting room, a clean kitchen and comfortable bedrooms.

I think it’s a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit it soon.

Yours,

Eric

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一封书信，所以人称应该用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。题目中对于写作内容已经做了详细的描述，写作时将其完成准确的表述出来，并且适当使用一些连接词，使文章更加紧密和流畅。

写作亮点： 这篇文章要点齐全，表达准确流畅，是一篇非常优秀的作文。文中使用了大量的短语和固定句型，例如：It takes 10 minutes by bike.骑单车要10分钟；句型it takes some time…花费时间……。Do excise做运动；help sb.with sth,帮助某人某事；all kinds of各种各样的；a good place to live一个好的居住地方，等等。