Question

假如你叫李敏, 你的笔友王艳邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语给她回信。词数60左右。

要点如下：1.你很抱歉, 不能去。2.你母亲病了, 医生叫她卧床几日, 你要照顾她。3.谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片,你很喜欢,将它放在书桌上。

Dear Wang Yan,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. _______________________________

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Give my wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Min

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Wang Yan,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. But I am very sorry I can’t come. My mother is ill. The doctor asks her to stay in bed for several days. I have to take care of my mother.

Thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard. I like it very much. I am going to put it on my desk. Could I hear from you soon?

Give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Min

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，李敏回信解释不去参加聚会。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am……；I have to……；Thank you very much for……及I am going to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达对王艳家人的祝福。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头感谢王艳的邀请，接下来说明不去参加聚会的理由，最后感谢王艳给她寄来的明信片。此处用了I am very sorry，stay in bed，take care of，hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。