Question

11．在你的成长过程中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说．请根据表格提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文．

要感谢的人	parents	teachers	classmates
感谢的原因	give a happy life，look after	hard-working，patient，helpful	get on well，learn a lot from each other
祝愿	in good health，have a better future

要求：1．不要逐词翻译，文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名．
2．词数80左右，内容可适当扩展．
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
    In my life，I get a lot of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They give a happy life to me．They do much for me．They look after me when I am sick and cook delicious food when I am at home．Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are hard-working．They are strict with me and they make me study hard．They are always patient when I ask them questions．They are helpful to me．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship．We get on well with each other and learn a lot from each other．I will never forget the days we played and studied together．
Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容为感谢在你成长过程中给过你帮助和关爱的人．时态用一般现在时，人称为第一人称．写作要点包括：1．感谢父母的照顾等 2．感谢老师的辛勤工作等 3．感谢同学．常用重点句型和短语：first…second…third…，be strict with sb．，get on well with each other等．

解答 In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They give a happy life to me．They do much for me．They look after me when I am sick and cook delicious food when I am at home．Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are hard-working．They are strict with me and they make me study hard．They are always patient when I ask them questions．They are helpful to me．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship．We get on well with each other and learn a lot from each other．I will never forget the days we played and studied together．
  Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥．