Question

你觉得你的校园生活安全吗？请你以“How to Keep Safe in School”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：

描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园里的意外事件（经过与结果）

提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议（至少两条）

呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全

作文要求：

1．不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生真实姓名。如需使用学校名称或学生的姓名，请一律使用Hill School和Tom。

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数.

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,

 

Answer 1

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. So, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.

So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.

At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，所给材料要点突出，要求明确。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些要点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作时要注意人称、时态的转换及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，文章组织结构合理，层次鲜明，句式多样。同时，文章中使用了一些的固定句式和短语，如： run after each other 、 fall down、because of 、had better do sth、keep an eye on、 stop sb from doing sth 、pay attention to等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结积累，熟练掌握一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：材料作文。