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11．假如你是李丹，请根据所给提示，用英文写一篇推荐信，推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生．词数：80左右．信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数、
1．王艳，16岁；一个聪明的女孩
2．学东西快，数学、语文、英语学得很好．擅长历史，对中国历史了解很多．
3．喜爱体育．篮球打得很好，是校篮球队的成员．
4．善良、勇敢，乐于助人．经常在车上给老人让座．经常帮助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一块湿毯子扑灭过一次火灾；
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl．She always wears a smile on her face．She is very clever and studies very hard．She learns everything quickly．She learns math，English and Chinese very well，and she is good athistory and knows much about history．She love sports．She plays basketball very well and she is in our school basketball team．After school，she often plays basketball with her classmates．She is kind and brave．She is always ready to help others．She often gives her seat to the old people on the bus．And she always help Mr．Wang carry water．Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire．
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She is always ready to help others他总是乐于帮助别人．
be ready to do sth准备做某事
【高分句型二】Once she was brave enough to put out a fire with a wet blanket曾经她足够勇敢的用一块湿毯子扑灭过一次火灾．
adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl．She is a clever girl．（王艳，16岁；一个聪明的女孩）She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．（学东西快，数学、语文、英语学得很好．擅长历史，对中国历史了解很多．）She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．（喜爱体育．篮球打得很好，是校篮球队的成员．）She is kind and brave．She is always ready to help others．【高分句型一】She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．Once she was brave enough to put out a fire with a wet blanket．【高分句型二】（善良、勇敢，乐于助人．经常在车上给老人让座．经常帮助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一块湿毯子扑灭过一次火灾；）
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan

点评 这篇作文要求我们以李丹的身份写一封推荐信，推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生．信的开头和结尾都已经写好了，我们需要将主要内容，即王艳的一些情况表述清楚．题目中给我们列出了一个提纲，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．这些内容包括王艳的年龄、学习情况、爱好和她的性格特点．这些内容应该用第三人称，一般现在时态表达，所以要特别注意每句话中谓语动词应该用三单的形式．其中在最后一点中王艳救了一个男孩，这一点我们需要用过去时态来表达，也要注意动词的正确形式．写作时，要注意多使用好的句型和短语以及一些连词，使整篇短文表达流畅，意思连贯．